First 5k Pass
​Sample Edits are not provided for this service
Are you wondering if your story is headed in the right direction? Want detailed feedback without committing to a full manuscript edit just yet? The First 5k Pass is a great way to get professional eyes on the opening pages of your draft—whether you’re revising, querying, or just getting started.
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This service is perfect for authors seeking targeted developmental or line-level feedback on the first 5,000 words of their manuscript. You'll receive thoughtful insights on what’s working, what could be stronger, and how to build on your story’s foundation with confidence.
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Included in this Service:
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Big-picture feedback on structure, character introduction, pacing, and clarity
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In-line margin comments with specific developmental suggestions
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Line-by-line edits for grammar or flow
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Included in Final Delivery:
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Annotated copy of your first 5,000 words with tracked changes and comments
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A short Editorial Letter with my overall impressions and suggestions
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This is also a great way to get an idea of the professional editing process before booking a larger service. If you decide you're interested in a more comprehensive edit afterward, the cost of your First 5k Pass will be applied toward your total, as long as it is within 30 days and no major changes were made to opening pages.
Let’s make your opening pages shine!
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Still have questions? See my FAQ or simply contact me. Check out examples of my work and see what previous clients have to say in my Portfolio.
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